Debrief for our second bulletin of the term.
Jack's piece about international students ID problems probably shouldn't have been top story, but had a lot of potential. It started with a 'drop intro', which is usually synonymous with stories just before the sport or an 'and finally', so that is almost proof that is should have been dropped lower. Plus, we only saw Jack in vision for a millisecond during his PTC, which looked slightly odd.
Julie's tuition fee story started with an excellent pull focus. Content wise, the quote didn't qualify the fact that they were supposedly "demonstrating" against the fees. We needed to find somebody who was directly effected, so we could get quotes strong enough.
Gareth's housing story (OOV) had a good opening shot. Also, the sound was disappointing on the councillor - be careful!
Aimee's OOV about the Queen Elizabeth naming ceremony was very well done and just helped to fill the bulletin, which is obviously the name of the game. We don't keep enough natural sound in, but Aimee did well to add colour to the piece in this way.
And in sport, the spelling errors! I won't say anything else because this is such a serious/needless issue that others fade into obscurity.
The BJTC thing was also good and the presenters did very well when ad-libbing about it...but we could drive this even more...
Jack's piece about international students ID problems probably shouldn't have been top story, but had a lot of potential. It started with a 'drop intro', which is usually synonymous with stories just before the sport or an 'and finally', so that is almost proof that is should have been dropped lower. Plus, we only saw Jack in vision for a millisecond during his PTC, which looked slightly odd.
Julie's tuition fee story started with an excellent pull focus. Content wise, the quote didn't qualify the fact that they were supposedly "demonstrating" against the fees. We needed to find somebody who was directly effected, so we could get quotes strong enough.
Gareth's housing story (OOV) had a good opening shot. Also, the sound was disappointing on the councillor - be careful!
Aimee's OOV about the Queen Elizabeth naming ceremony was very well done and just helped to fill the bulletin, which is obviously the name of the game. We don't keep enough natural sound in, but Aimee did well to add colour to the piece in this way.
And in sport, the spelling errors! I won't say anything else because this is such a serious/needless issue that others fade into obscurity.
The BJTC thing was also good and the presenters did very well when ad-libbing about it...but we could drive this even more...
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