Winchester News Online Editor Catherine Hayes
General point: We still need to get in control of the script and the processes that will coe with it
1. Homeless people (Jack)
- good use of actuality
- juxtaposition libel? Was the busker actually homeless?
- weird interview
- funny jump cut
2. Spending cut chat: pretty well done
3. Court (Giddings)
- identification of reg. plate, potential danger
- excellent pull focus
- PTC slightly over-exposed
- very good scripting
4. Train fares (Julie)
- first shot quite long
- vary GVs more
- tense problems: used "this morning" when it was not possible in time
5. Last-min piece (Stu)
- Awesome to turn it around in a day
- PTC a bit close up
- Allotment thing slight overlooked in my opinion...was very good for pictures
6. Bishop (Mike)
- interview needs to be eye-level
- GVs: lack of relevance
SPORT...
- champagne thing a bit weirdly done, but great idea
- basketball: funny lighting and interview a bit echoey
BBC South Editor Lee Desty
General points: Good to get rehearsals in, gallery plugged away well, changes to stories worth the stress!
- Didn't grab our audience enough in first 30 seconds. Very important point for South Today.
- Maybe four headlines: two news, two sport?
- No actuality in headlines and we need to make sure we use our very best shots (e.g. - busker?)
1. Homeless people (Jack)
- interview a long shot. Get tighter!
2. Spending cut chat
- someone said "it's bad for us", understand the pressure of the situation, but need to remain impartial
- good initiative though
3. Court (Giddings)
- questions over paedo stories in bulletins at all, due to the family aspect...kids watching
- needed a mug shot
- good command of facts
4. Train fares (Julie)
- vox pops weak
- PTC well framed
- v/o needed more energy
5. Last-min piece (Stu)
- he really liked it!
- PTC a bit long but tried to get a lot of facts in
6. Bishop (Mike)
- Not great for an 'and finally'
- cutaway to a hedge???
SPORT...
- A big divider for a family watching, so three mins out of ten perhaps too long
- South Today has five minutes in 30
- Winchester City highlights needed a bit more colour and stats to add to the action we can see anyway
- Good graphic, lucky we can use proper logo for the league.
- Interview with Basketball coach: Basketball on desk...why?! Quite funny though.
General point: We still need to get in control of the script and the processes that will coe with it
1. Homeless people (Jack)
- good use of actuality
- juxtaposition libel? Was the busker actually homeless?
- weird interview
- funny jump cut
2. Spending cut chat: pretty well done
3. Court (Giddings)
- identification of reg. plate, potential danger
- excellent pull focus
- PTC slightly over-exposed
- very good scripting
4. Train fares (Julie)
- first shot quite long
- vary GVs more
- tense problems: used "this morning" when it was not possible in time
5. Last-min piece (Stu)
- Awesome to turn it around in a day
- PTC a bit close up
- Allotment thing slight overlooked in my opinion...was very good for pictures
6. Bishop (Mike)
- interview needs to be eye-level
- GVs: lack of relevance
SPORT...
- champagne thing a bit weirdly done, but great idea
- basketball: funny lighting and interview a bit echoey
BBC South Editor Lee Desty
General points: Good to get rehearsals in, gallery plugged away well, changes to stories worth the stress!
- Didn't grab our audience enough in first 30 seconds. Very important point for South Today.
- Maybe four headlines: two news, two sport?
- No actuality in headlines and we need to make sure we use our very best shots (e.g. - busker?)
1. Homeless people (Jack)
- interview a long shot. Get tighter!
2. Spending cut chat
- someone said "it's bad for us", understand the pressure of the situation, but need to remain impartial
- good initiative though
3. Court (Giddings)
- questions over paedo stories in bulletins at all, due to the family aspect...kids watching
- needed a mug shot
- good command of facts
4. Train fares (Julie)
- vox pops weak
- PTC well framed
- v/o needed more energy
5. Last-min piece (Stu)
- he really liked it!
- PTC a bit long but tried to get a lot of facts in
6. Bishop (Mike)
- Not great for an 'and finally'
- cutaway to a hedge???
SPORT...
- A big divider for a family watching, so three mins out of ten perhaps too long
- South Today has five minutes in 30
- Winchester City highlights needed a bit more colour and stats to add to the action we can see anyway
- Good graphic, lucky we can use proper logo for the league.
- Interview with Basketball coach: Basketball on desk...why?! Quite funny though.
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